Wednesday, 30 December 2009

Avocado Baby - John Burningham

Mr and Mrs Hargraves, as well as their son and daughter, are not the strongest specimens of the human race so they naturally hope the newest addition to the family will prove to be more robust. After the baby is born, however, Mrs Hargraves has a lot of difficulty feeding it and indeed finding any sort of food that it likes.


Poor Mrs Hargraves is eventually driven to tears, but her son and daughter notice an avocado pear in the fruit bowl and suggest their mother feed it to their baby brother. The mystery is that nobody knows how the avocado got there, as the Hargraves certainly hadn't bought it. In her desperation, however, Mrs Hargraves cuts it in half, mashes it up and feeds it to the baby. Since he eats it all, Mrs Hargraves continues to give him avocado pear every day. The baby soon becomes so strong that he is able to break out of his high chair and pull a cartload of children up a hill.


One night the baby hears a burglar in the house; he gets hold of a broom and chases the terrified burglar away. After that the baby helps with carrying shopping, moving furniture and pushing the family car with everyone in it. The baby is thankfully able to deal with two bullies who attack his brother and sister while they are walking him in the park. The baby simply picks them up and throws them into the pond. The story ends with a picture of the baby having a rest in his carry-cot and the news that he continues to get stronger eating avocado pears.


John Burningham's stories are generally rather unusual, and Avocado Baby does seem a little strange as a young children's book. There is, however, quite a bit a humour in the story, and young children will doubtless be delighted by the idea of a baby moving a piano or picking up a bully in each hand. Parents who have had problems feeding their children will appreciate Mrs Hargraves' desperation as well as her relief when her baby wolfs down that first avocado pear and then starts to become stronger by the day. It is good to see the older siblings playing their part too, and of course being protected by the astonishing baby.


Burningham illustrates his books himself, and all except one of the pictures here are in full colour. The backgrounds are almost all white, so there is no difficulty with reading the text. The colours used are bright and varied which I think is important in a young children's book. One page, where Mrs Hargraves is shown trying to feed the baby, is set out like a comic strip with a series of pictures. We see the baby angrily pushing the plate away, as well as Mrs Hargraves attempting to feed him in the bath and while he is standing up in his cot. She is at her wits' end and will try anything. This is a page with no text that could generate discussions about the various scenarios, considering the feeding problem from both the baby's and the mother's point of view. Favourite illustrations are likely to be the full-page one of the burglar dropping his swag bag when he sees the baby brandishing a broom behind him, or the double-page spread of the two bullies landing in the pond with an almighty splash that disturbs the poor ducks and a fish.


The endpapers at both the front and back of the book show a double-page spread of an avocado plant covered with miniature babies in various colourful outfits. Some are perched on leaves while others appear to be performing gymnastics. This is a delightful illustration and again could be an inspiration for a conversation about what the babies are doing.


The text is in a particularly large and clear font and is always on a white background. There are never more than eight lines on a single page, usually less, and sometimes the text is broken up into smaller sections with illustrations in between. This is of course a book that is intended to be read aloud to very young children, but because of the clarity and the lack of long passages of text, it might also be suitable for young independent readers.


I didn't find 'Avocado Baby' to be such an outstanding book as John Burningham's 'Cloudland', either visually or in terms of the story. The ending of 'Avocado Baby' is perhaps a bit of an anticlimax, as we are simply told that things carried on as they were. I would, however, definitely recommend this as a book to borrow from the library, and Amazon's current price of £3.94 seems a reasonable one. I don't know if any miraculously strong, avocado-eating babies have come about as a result of having this book read aloud, but I would recommend it as an unusual story that has a fair amount of humour that will appeal to most young children.



Avocado Baby

John Burningham

Paperback, 32 pages

Red Fox, 1994

ISBN 9780099200611

Price £5.99 (Amazon £3.94)

Tuesday, 29 December 2009

The Rattletrap Car - Phyllis Root and Jill Barton

During the National Year of Reading, I thought I should look for some different books to read aloud at the nursery where I work. I found just the book to inspire me at my local library: Rattletrap Car, by Phyllis Root, illustrated by Jill Barton.


Why did it take me so long to discover this wonderful book? What if I never had? My experience of the English language would have been so much the poorer. How have I been working with young children for so long and not known of the existence of razzleberry dazzleberry snazzleberry fizz? Thankfully now I do, and I also understand to what uses chocolate marshmallow fudge delight can be put.


The story of Rattletrap Car revolves around Junie, Jakie, baby and Dad. Mum is not mentioned at all, but they seem to muddle through without her. The story starts as Dad is tending to the chickens on their farm. A pig looks on, and Junie, Jakie and the baby, sitting on the ground and feeling the heat, decide that it would be a good idea to go to the lake. Dad, however, surveys their rattletrap car and is concerned that 'it doesn't go fast and it doesn't go far'. The children aren't taking no for an answer, however, although Junie and Jakie are polite enough to say 'Please, please, please!' Baby just cries out 'Go!'


Dad knows he must give it a try, so he packs the aforementioned fizz and fudge delight. Junie brings her enormous beach-ball, and Jakie a surf-board that's about twice as long as he is tall. Baby naturally has a 'three-speed, wind-up, paddle-wheel boat'.


As their journey begins, we are treated to a feast of onomatopoeia: 'Clinkety clankety bing bang pop!' Then disaster number one strikes as a tyre goes flat. Junie is not fazed; she replaces the flat tyre with her beach ball, sticking it in place with chocolate marshmallow fudge delight. It's the obvious thing to do.


Off they go again, 'clinkety clankety', but every so often another part of the car falls off. No problem: they improvise and replace it with one of the other things they have brought along. Each time they get going again, we are treated to another burst of onomatopoeia, be it 'wappity bappity', 'fizzelly sizzelly', 'flippita fluppita', or a combination thereof.


If you want to know whether or not the car survived the journey all the way to the lake and home again, I'm sorry, but you will just have to read the book for yourself.


This is an amazing book to read aloud to young children. The lettering is in red in a large font, but I wouldn't recommend it for emergent readers as they might get a complex struggling with words such as 'bappity', 'rattletrap' or 'bumpety'. It will be as much a delight for most adults as for children, so it is a book to be enjoyed together, savouring the wonderful sounds that Phyllis Root has conjured up here. This is magical language.


Jill Barton's colourful illustrations fill every page and make this book a visual treasure as much as a linguistic one. A little flock of sheep comes along to gaze dumbfounded at one of the problems the family is having, and rabbits look on under a moonlit sky at the end of the story.


This is one book that Dads who take the children out on their own for the day can have a great laugh over. Not being a driver or a mechanic myself, I cannot vouch for the solutions the family finds for their broken car, but I think I can safely say don't try this on your way to the lake when your car breaks down...


For the joy of the language and the drawings, as well as the idea of using your imagination and improvising when things go wrong, this is a book that will provide entertainment again and again. It also demonstrates how family members can work together to overcome obstacles and not give up the minute a problem arises. Although aimed at young children, I think anyone who can read English and has a love of language and books should read this one.


Rattletrap Car

by Phyllis Root

illustrated by Jill Barton

Walker Books, 2002

Paperback, 40 pages

ISBN 0744589320

Sunday, 27 December 2009

Peace at Last - Jill Murphy

Jill Murphy's 'Peace at Last' is the story of Mr Bear's quest for a quiet night's sleep. The book appears to feature the three bears of Goldilocks fame: Mr Bear, Mrs Bear and Baby Bear, who are first seen at the end of the day, very sleepy, then making their way up the stairs to bed.


Mrs Bear falls asleep straight away, but she begins to snore heavily and sleep therefore eludes Mr Bear. He decides to go and spend the night in his son's room, but finds Baby Bear still wide awake, playing aeroplanes and making 'NYAAOW' noises. So it's back downstairs for Mr Bear, where he goes from the living-room to the kitchen to the garden, but each place has its annoying noises that foil his attempts to go to sleep. He eventually tries the car, finds it cold and uncomfortable but begins to drift off. Almost immediately, the sound of the birds and the strong sunshine disturb him. He goes back to his own bed where he does find 'Peace at Last' as Mrs Bear has stopped snoring. But how much time is left before the alarm clock rings?


Mrs Bear brings her husband a 'nice cup of tea', unaware of his sleepless night. Baby Bear is of course full of beans first thing in the morning, and jumps on his parents' bed, brandishing the post. Poor Mr Bear is not amused.


Although sleepless nights are perhaps a problem that affects adults more than children, this is a good book to enjoy reading aloud together, and young children find the idea of trying to sleep in the garden or the kitchen amusing enough. I've recently read this story to a small group of four-year-olds and asked them afterwards to try to remember all the different places where Mr Bear tried to go to sleep and what noise disturbed him in each of those places. I was impressed that they remembered the snoring, the aeroplane noises, the cuckoo clock, the drip of a leaky tap, the hum of the fridge, the sound of the animals and birds in the garden, everything in fact except for the alarm clock.


Jill Murphy's illustrations for her picture books are always of the highest standard and have obviously had a great deal of time, thought and care devoted to them. My only comment on the illustrations in 'Peace at Last' is that they are of necessity all in rather gloomy colours because the story takes place during the night. They do not lack in quality in any way, but they may not appeal to young children quite as much as more brightly coloured pictures would.


The full-page illustrations are in each case on the right-hand-side of a double page, with a small amount of text and one or two miniature black-and-white drawings adding information on the facing left-hand page. One or two of the left-hand pages actually feature white text on a black background to emphasise the idea that the story takes place at night.


'Peace at Last' is primarily a story to be read aloud to children aged from around two-and-a-half to five-years-old. As the amount of text on each page is not too daunting and the facing illustrations give obvious clues as to what is happening, this might make a suitable book for a young reader aged five to seven who is gaining in confidence. I have recently said that it is hard to go wrong with David Melling, and I would certainly say the same about Jill Murphy.


Peace at Last

by Jill Murphy

Macmillan Children's Books, 2007

Paperback, 36 pages

ISBN 0230015484

Price £5.99 (Amazon £3.59)

Thursday, 24 December 2009

Noko's Surprise Party - Fiona Moodie

South-African Fiona Moodie wanted to write and illustrate children's books from a young age and it is easy to see that she had the talent to fulfil her ambition. Noko's Surprise Party is her latest picture book and is a follow-up to Noko and the Night Monster.


As Takadu the aardvark and Noko the porcupine have been friends for so long, it is only natural that Takadu wants to plan a party for Noko's birthday, but it is to be a surprise. Takadu goes to considerable trouble to write and hand out invitations to Mrs. Warthog, Bat-eared Fox, Pangolin (a scaly anteater), Velvet Monkey and Guineafowl. The problems begin when Greedy Hyena sees Takadu deliver the invitations and realises that he has not been included because of his awful manners. He follows secretly when Takadu goes on a long journey to collect figs for the party. As Takadu is going back through the Dark Wild Wood, he meets Bushbaby and gives him one of the figs because he is so hungry. Leaving the wood, he comes across Mountain Tortoise lying on his back under the baking sun; he has to turn him the right way up and then give him a juicy fig to quench his thirst. Although his basket is now slightly lighter, Takadu is growing tired and decides to have a nap in the shade of a cabbage tree. Hyena has been waiting for his chance for revenge, and he gobbles up all but one of the figs that Takadu has collected.


Poor Takadu is of course upset and angry when he wakes up and sees what has happened. He can smell Hyena and realises that he is the culprit. What will he be able to do to make sure that Noko still has a wonderful birthday party? Will Hyena live to regret his greed?


Folk tales seem to have gone out of fashion, but this is a book that might reverse that trend. The 'hero', Takadu, is a delightful character who loves making up songs and manages to sing even when things are going against him. He is always eager to help his fellow creatures. Noko is another admirable role model who wants everybody to be happy on his birthday. Greedy Hyena, however, is the typical villain; he is understandably upset at not receiving an invitation, but his selfish way of taking revenge only leaves him feeling even more isolated at the start of the party. Children can learn some good lessons here about how behaviour affects the feelings of others as well as ourselves. The lessons, of course, come across in the most enjoyable and natural of ways.


Most of the pages present just a few lines of text in a large, clear font under or alongside the illustrations. There are also a few wonderful double-page spreads where the text is superimposed on the picture, but the light-coloured backgrounds make for easy reading. This is essentially a book for reading aloud; it would not be the easiest one for a young reader to tackle, especially as there are one or two unfamiliar phrases such as 'a calabash of marala berry juice'. For a gifted and confident young reader, the story would present an interesting challenge.


Moodie is an illustrator as much as an author, and the pictures here make a huge contribution to the book as a whole. I find her style very original and delightful. It has a primitive feel to it and yet seems up to date at the same time. The animals – with the exception of Greedy Hyena, of course – always look so friendly and inviting. Landscapes range from the desert with blue mountains in the distance to the Dark Wild Wood where wide-eyed bats hang from branches. A map of the area spreads over both the front and back inside covers. Here, as well as the trees, rivers and rocks, we see charming scenes of Takadu playing a tune on his guitar for Noko, Velvet Monkey climbing the trunk of a palm tree, and Bat-eared Fox emerging from his hole. I had never heard of a pangolin before, but I think I might be able to recognise one now.


The book was first published in 2007 and is unfortunately only available in a hardcover version at the moment. I presume a cheaper paperback version is forthcoming, as even Amazon's discounted price of £7.91 is quite hefty for a children's book, albeit a beautiful and worthwhile one. I suggest borrowing a copy from a library first to see if you think it would be worth buying. The price is my only reservation, as it is a story that provides a great deal of enjoyment, complemented by delightful illustrations. A whole-hearted recommendation.



Noko's Surprise Party

by Fiona Moodie

Hardback, 32 Pages

Frances Lincoln Publishers, 2007

ISBN 1845075870

Price £11.99 (£7.91 on Amazon)

Sunday, 20 December 2009

Tell me something happy before I go to sleep - Joyce Dunbar


'Tell me something happy before I go to sleep' by Joyce Dunbar tells the story of Willa, a young rabbit (depicted as a soft toy) who cannot get to sleep and seeks comfort from her elder brother Willoughby. Willa is afraid she will have bad dreams, so Willoughby encourages her to think of something happy instead.

Willia crosses her ears over her eyes to concentrate, but she can't think of anything happy, so she askes Willoughby to suggest something. Willoughby, who is sitting up reading in the top bunk, tells Willa to look under her bed. Willa sees her chicken slippers there, which her brother reminds her are waiting for nobody's feet but Willa's. Willa agrees that this is a happy thought, but she is not easily satisfied and asks for another one.

Willoughby draws her attention to a chair, where his sister's jumpsuit is longing for tomorrow when Willa will jump up and put it on. Willa is enjoying this too much, and wants another happy thought. This time Willoughby picks her up and carries her downstairs to the larder to see the food that is waiting to be made into breakfast. Once again, Willa is pleased, but still wants more. Brother and sister go to look at the toys in the sitting room, and then look out of the window at the night, which Willoughby tells Willa is waiting for the morning.

I will leave you to discover the end of the story, although rest assured, Willa does drift off to sleep quite soon after this.

The story is a lovely one for encouraging an older brother to look after and comfort his sister. It is interesting that at no point in the story does Willa want to go to her Mum or Dad; in fact there is no sign of parents anywhere in the house. Willoughby certainly thinks he is quite capable of convincing Willa how to go to sleep.

The illustrations by Debi Gliori add charm to the story. Willa and Willoughby both have incredibly long, floppy ears, and Willa's jumpsuit is intricately patterned with lettuces and carrots. The rabbits' house is inside a huge tree trunk, and the rather dark interior is brightened up by patchwork quilts in the bedroom and floral wallpaper and curtains in the sitting room. The rabbits have loving smiles on their faces in most of the illustrations.

This should be the perfect bedtime story, unless of course your child wants to emulate Willa and be shown all sorts of things around the house and outside the window before settling down to sleep! I hope this won't be the case.


I don't use this as a bedtime story, but as a book for seven to eight-year-olds that need reading practice. My only criticism here is the choice of the name Willoughby, as this is obviously a very difficult spelling to make sense of. I thought eight-year-old boys might find the story too babyish, but in fact they have enjoyed it.

Amazon are selling the Corgi paperback at £5.99, but there are much lower prices on Amazon Marketplace. I personally have the Red Fox Mini Treasures version, 24 pages, at £1.50.


Friday, 18 December 2009

Mister Magnolia - Quentin Blake


Animals often seem to be the main focus of children's poetry, but Mister Magnolia by Quentin Blake is the story of a poor man who had only one boot:


'He has green parakeets

who pick holes in his suit -

And some very fat owls

who are learning to hoot -

But Mr Magnolia

has only one boot.'


Mister Magnolia may sound like a sorry character, but lacking a boot doesn't seem to stop him having fun. He dances while his two sisters play the flute, takes children for a ride on his scooter, and juggles with fruit at the market stall.


This is a light-hearted piece of narrative poetry that has a happy ending as a little girl presents Mister Magnolia with a parcel that contains another boot. It doesn't match the one he already has, but never mind, it's a boot, and Mister Magnolia is deliriously happy. It might seem like a strange story, but Quentin Blake is of course the genius behind the illustrations to Roald Dahl's books, and he has provided wonderful coloured drawings to his own story here. We are introduced to Mister Magnolia's purple dinosaur, and we see our hero splashing down a water chute and saluting to a parade of mice. There is plenty here to capture the imagination of young children.


There are never more than five lines of text per page, in fact often just one or two. The text is in a clear font that is always on a white background, so there are no problems in deciphering the words. This makes Mister Magnolia a book that could be suitable for young independent readers as well as one for reading aloud. There are one or two challenging words such as 'parakeets' and 'magnificent', but the use of rhyme often helps a reader along, as do illustrations.


The illustrations appear in colour on every page of the book, making it bright and appealing. Although the colours are vivid, they are certainly not lurid as in some contemporary picture books. Blake's use of watercolour gives them a delightful quality.


This is a book that will not take long to read to a child who has a short attention span. The drawings, however, are worth stopping to take a closer look at. In Mister Magnolia's pond, a frog and a newt are dancing together on a lily pad while a toad looks on; a mouse is tickling Mister Magnolia's bare foot with an ear of wheat as a snail creeps away. For any adult looking to make it a more educational experience, there are opportunities for counting or identifying different types of fruit.


Mister Magnolia is definitely worth borrowing from the library before you decide whether you want to buy a copy. As well as the full size book, there is a Mini Treasure version (also published by Red Fox) that measures 5.5 in. x 4 in. At £1.50, it will hardly break the bank. The book is likely to appeal to children aged from three up to perhaps six.


If only we were all so easily pleased as Mister Magnolia, with two odd boots...


Mister Magnolia

by Quentin Blake

Paperback, 32 pages

Red Fox; New Edition 1999

ISBN 0099400421

Price £5.99 (Amazon £4.49)

Thursday, 17 December 2009

Just Like You - Jan Fearnley


Jan Fearnley's 'Just Like You' is the delightful story of Mama Mouse and Little Mouse walking home to bed as the sun is setting. On their way they pass five other families of animals that are settling down for the night. Little Mouse notices in each case that one of the parents is telling the babies what they will do to look after them. Everything sounds so impressive that Little Mouse feels that the babies must be very special. Each time Mama Mouse tells her offspring that they are all indeed very special, 'Just like you'.


First they pass under a tree where a mother bird is telling her chicks in the nest that she will fly as high as the clouds and across the sky to find the best food for them. Then they come to a pond where Daddy Frog is settling the froglets under a lily leaf for the night. He promises to jump sky high and find the juiciest bugs for them. Little Mouse doesn't like the idea of the bugs but is still impressed. Further along the way, a mother rabbit and her kittens are basking in the sun's last rays of the day. The mother claims that she will dig the deepest burrow to keep her babies 'safe as treasure' and warm. Little Mouse thinks this sounds like hard work.


Down by the seashore, Mama Seal is singing a lullaby to her one and only pup. She boasts that she will dive deep to find shells, corals and fish for him. The last family that Mama Mouse and Little Mouse see is the family of foxes. Father Fox says he will run so far and fast that he will be able to protect his babies from any danger.


By the time the mice arrive home, Little Mouse is looking very thoughtful. As he gets ready for bed, he wonders what Mama Mouse will do for him, since she can't fly, jump, dig, dive or run. Maybe he is not special? Mama Mouse, however, assures him that she will tell him stories, play with him, feed him, cuddle him and even be extremely cross when he is naughty. Most of all, she will always love and care for him. Little Mouse goes to bed happy, feeling very special, and whispers that Mama Mouse is also very special, just like him.


Fearnley's story is a particularly sweet one for the very young. It is an ideal bedtime story because we see Little Mouse being tucked in bed right at the end, as well as the other animals settling down for the night earlier in the book. It is also an excellent story for introducing a small but varied group of animals that each have their own special skills that young children can learn about. The adult that has read to the child could ask if they can remember which animal can dive, which can jump, or which can run fast. A child might also learn from this book that a baby rabbit, just like a baby cat, is called a kitten, and that a baby seal is a pup.


I have the Mini Book version in which the font used for the text is rather small, but 'Just Like You' is available in a larger format. Some pages have two or three lines of text, some have only one and a few have five, so there is never a huge amount to read before moving on to the next page. The text is often superimposed on the illustrations but always on a light colour, so there is no difficulty in deciphering it. Although this is essentially a book to read aloud, young independent readers might enjoy it too.


Fearnley's accompanying watercolour illustrations are absolutely charming. We see Little Mouse trying to imitate Daddy Frog laughing and leaping, while Mama Mouse watches, hands on hips. A cross section of a warren depicts a mole banging on his ceiling with a broom as a rabbit in the hole above prances around playing on a pipe. On another page, a baby fox rolls in the grass, another is climbing all over his dad, and a third is offering him a poppy. On several pages there are extra little creatures to spot such as butterflies, ladybirds and a squirrel.


'Just Like You' makes a refreshing change from cartoon characters, dinosaurs and aliens should you or your children be growing tired of those. Unless you find a small font to be a problem, it is definitely worth buying the Mini Book for £1.99. The larger format is £5.99 (slightly discounted on Amazon). I would recommend it as a gentle bedtime story for those with a love of animals and the countryside.